BirthRights: Toomoko's Start

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Lying nearby was a younger fawn, half immersed in the water. He showed no signs of cold, his dense, short light coloured fur keeping himself relatively warm as he lay with his head propped against the long slender trunk of a tree that had fallen long before his own father was born.

Father? The fawn shuddered in his uneasy sleep. No, he must not dwell on it. The memory to painful to bear, his mind trotted restlessly as he continued to dream. He dreamt of many things that have happened in his so short life so far. The confusing neglect, the shocked reaction and rejection by his own deer now returned in full to the front of his young mind. He sighed, it sounded like a squeaky low growl. He could do nothing for him. His mother, he never even knew.

His breath quickened, his small pale chest rising and falling fast as he dreamt of running. Running so far that he had become lost in the strange new territory that was not anyone’s as no one had yet moved to evict him from the collection of water. The spray of the waterfall that filled the large pond did not reach him were he lay, and he was thankful.

His pale fur glistened in the wetness of the morning. What was not underwater was layered with the morning dew as he shuddered, struggling from the whispers and the silence that haunted him in his sleep.
“Such a odd little fawn, so light and that pelt can’t mean anything good!”
“He’d be a liability! Spotted in a instant by hunters…”
“Who was his mother? He’s a scraggly little thing. Abandoned him so close to us, his own mother did. The indecency to leave! She cannot even raise her own fawn!”

With a grunt and a splash when he shifted his head in his troubled sleep his head fell from the log into the water. His eyes wide and wild as he lifted it again coughing and spluttering as he tried to regain his breath once more. Another nightmare he had escaped from. He glanced upwards with muddy gold eyes, registering the surrounding that he had fallen asleep in. His ears twitching to the sounds of another’s hoof beats.
His breath caught in his throat. Another so close, it was not that he was scared. He, in his long day of running and falling into this pool of water, gave up. It was enviable someone would catch him. His pale yellow and white fur stood out against the dull greens and browns of the forest. Scrambling and slipping to his hooves, poised to run before catching sight of what had awoken him from his self pitying stupor. His softly furred, long ears stood tall as he watched. He stood in terror. Unsure how to react, respond.

One thing he was never taught; How to react to others. The loneliness of rejection had seen well to that.


[ Birthrights belongs to Me and Reetno =3 ]
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Another great piece! To

Another great piece! Laughing out loud

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
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Thankyou Fenqua

Thankyou Fenqua ^^
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Courage is knowing what not to fear
----[My Deer]----
Toomoko - Courage is knowing what not to fear [Absent]
Belinir - Dreams of a Forest that Deer Run Free