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I'm not gonna lie
I'm not afraid to die
The life after this holds a greater joy for me
My life on earth is just that
It's a life to be lived
These obstacles that hit me
Again and again like the rolling waves
Really are not so important
I toss around the idea
That I would want to make a huge impact
Probably not
I prefer to simply help others in smaller ways
That I feel comfortable enough
That I would not let them down
My friends I hold dear to me
They are just like family
I marvel at the lightning in the sky


During a rainstorm
And wonder what would it be like to fly
You can think of so many impossible things
And you can cherish each and every one in your dreams

Dreams are for the soul
They help you live your life
For where would be without dreams today
Probably no where great
With every choice there is a chance
Every chance envolves a risk
Some slightly higher than the rest
There are many things I could list
But all I have to say is everything
From day to day
Has beauty and love
Give it a chance
Open your eyes
To see
Open your heart to feel
What truly is real
Never be discouraged
And die in piece

Sorry for posting

Why so apologetic?

Why so apologetic?

I just think my writing is

I just think my writing is well terrible and thought process on this was just every where.
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Why sorry for posting ? This

Why sorry for posting ? This is really beautiful Eye
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