Thinner I

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What ever god is out there. I know I have sined. And I know it isn't
right to ask you to help me to fufill a sin.
But
now, I'm asking you for one favor ...

Don't let me disapear yet...

... not until I see him ...

... don't let me die yet...

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Clementine's story
Thinnner



Subdued into this low state of emergency was unhealthy for
everyone.

Question was when would it end?

It has been months, days, years, seens I've seen the sun. And yet...

What douse it matter, I don't even remember its apperance. All I remember
is light.

This is my home now, darkness and insecurity, not sure If the same thing beside you
is your kind. All you can feel is skin, and darkness. Yes, darkness it's so thick
it thins the skin on you, making you vulnerable to every touch.

This place was my home, so long ago...


I can see it, can you? A wide open vally, trees surrounding
the borders of the mountains. We where happy creatures.
Both beautiful inside and out. I had a merry childhood.

Now... as you may know... things always change.
They always change, even when you try so hard to preserve
what you got.

Something came that day... what it was we never know...

But the clouds no longer were puff balls of dreams, but
of nightmares.

... and if you looked...

.. if you dared to...

... you would see the most harrowing sight that any creature could look upon...
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Can you say cliff hanger? I

Can you say cliff hanger?

I tried to do clems story all in pics...

Twas hard. I made a few comic strips I may
post later.

Anywho, I dicided to write it, and possibly
illustrate some parts of her story later.

I must admit, there is some mispelled words
swimming around in there ^-^



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I'm very much looking

I'm very much looking forward to the rest of the story! Laughing out loud

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Wow, that was an amazing

Wow, that was an amazing piece of writing. <3
I love it and I'd love to read more.
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Blackhoof is always so deep

Blackhoof is always so deep and dark ..


[Click Larr's Egg]
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Ephra= Hopefully I can get

Ephra= Hopefully I can get the secound one
out tomorrow. I'm still trying to get finished with some
request.

Fledermaus= Glad you liked it deary. I decided to
change the writting style. And make Clem tell her story,
rather than me.

Larr= Eh, it gets cloudy here alot ^-^



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