The legend deer, Arneck.Chapter two...

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Chapter two Endless forest is in the bad time of death.

When the startled hunters realized they had not been hurt they too realized,they were in a place they never seen.As scared and shaking as they were,they decided they were only in another forest.The hunters walked until they saw a deer that would scare any human as much as it scared them,the deer looked like,a zombie!It looked like bite wounds were on its fur yet those wounds would have killed that standing alive deer.Its antlers were red and looked like no antlers they have ever seen.Its mask was like an animal skull.He,Mark loaded his gun quietly,then aimed.He pulled the trigger but he missed.Unlucky for him (the hunter)the hunter tried to shoot a warrior deer.The deer,Aresle told his fellow warriors and passing fawns and stags.When by mistake mask less Arneck and his dad headed the hunters way.when Arneck was seen by the hiding hunter,Paul he told Mark that,the fawns face looked like a humans face!They walked off and when a almost-normal-looking-deer wandered by Paul hit the deer with the bullet,in the heart.Every deer we see we kill.said Paul and thats when it was going to be the worst time.In about One hour they killed ten deer every hour they passed was ten killed deer.After being two hours there instead they killed,40 deer.

Plz if you read this click on its title so i know if I should make another chapter depending on how many people read the chapters.Im trying to make a good story for the first time.So i dont want my story to fail!

Seems good so far, but

Seems good so far, but remember, there should be two spaces after every period. Like this. It will make reading your story easier.
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Thanks! Keep on reading! Oh

Thanks! Keep on reading! Oh and I only need about 13 reads for me to think some people like it.
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I know it's nice to know

I know it's nice to know people enjoy reading your story, but write it for yourself first and foremost. If you are enjoying it, others will to!