The Dream, The Parting, The Sorrow, A Finished Story.

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i would like some pictures for this. so i can print them and make it into a small story book. oh and i am not going to finish my other one. the last chapter i did on it screwed it all up. and now i am not interested in it. i can post the begining if you want. just ask

I do not know whether I should make this in game real, or just a story. I am still deciding. But I will post it all. I guess. Thanks to mothwing i am now going to use correct spelling and grammer for this story. and only this story for i am very lazy.
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The Dream, The Parting, The Sorrow.

characters
- Kana
- Kana’s inner thought
- Emiva
- Srgo
- The Twin Gods
- Forest
- Rue-u

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Chapter 1-Night, The Dream

He awoke from a deep sleep. His head turning every which way. His mind trying to focus on anything it could find. Images flashing in unseeing eyes, both from the dream and from reality. He tries to figure out which is witch. Slowly standing, he stretches, shakes his head, and looks towards the doe sleeping beside him. He smiles a sad smile at her, and nuzzles her.

"Wake up Emiva. it’s a brand new day." He says in a slightly sad voice.

He leaves her to wake up and goes and takes a sip in the pond nearby. Looking at his own reflection seeing what no other deer could see, he thinks back to his dream, and dreads it. Dreads what will happen to those he loves and those he has befriended. He takes a sip and walks back to the drowsy Emiva.

"Let's go find Gwen and the others" Kana said in a more cheery voice.
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Chapter 2-Next Night, The Meeting

He hears something in the distance and starts awake. He looks around and walks a little ways, as not to wake Emiva. " Who's there?" He calls out. " Answer me!" He said. he looks around again and heads back to the sleeping doe.

"Kanastigu." A voice whispers. He turns around and unfurls his wings ready to fight. No one was there. confused he turns back to see one of the twin Gods standing there. " What do you want?" kana says startled and sourly.

" You know what you must do Trapped Soul." The God whispers. Kana looks down. " I know." He says sadly. "But why? Why not just let this Trapped Soul free? “ kana said in a questioning tone.

The God bows and sadly smiles to the misfit. I am truly sorry Trapped Soul." The God says as it disappears.

Slightly Shaken but more angry than anything else, Kana heads back to Emiva, she stirs. " Is everything ok? She asks sleepily. He smiles at her. " Yes. Go back to sleep." he says as he nuzzles her. Looking around one more time, he closes his eyes and tries to sleep too.

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Chapter 3 - Next Morning, The Waking

“Wake up Kana, come on lazy bones.” said Emiva. “ gmmmann 5 minmnmnkn!” Kana mumbles “Come on.” She nudges him to his feet. “I’m awake. I’m awake” he says cheerfully.

He looks around confused. “Was it just a dream again?” He mutters to himself. “What is it?” Emiva asks. “Oh nothing. I’m fine.” kana said. Looking around once more, then up to the statues. He trots off after Emiva. "wait up!” He calls out to her.
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Chapter 4- Couple Nights Later, Bad Dreams

“Kana. Kana. Wake up Kana.” Emiva says as she shakes him awake. ”Wake up. It’s just a dream.” She shakes him again. He snaps awake and looks around. ” It was just a dream Kana….. Are you ok now?” Said Emiva.

He stares at her and blinks. He shakes his head yes. ”Yes I’m ok. Let’s go back to sleep.” He said. ” I wish it was just a dream.” he mumbles.
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Chapter 5- Peaceful Shatter, Another Meeting

Days and nights pass peacefully. It was a beautiful day out as Kana stands in the water drinking. “Trapped Soul.” Said a whisper. ” Go away I am happy now.” He snaps at nothing. ” Trapped Soul, it is time.” It says again. ” NO! I can’t do that to her!” he snaps back.

“ You must. You have served us well.” It whispers again. Little ripples in the water appear with every word. He sighs. ” When?” He says sadly. “Tomorrow. Lots will see. Make sure you say your goodbyes.” The voice whispers.

”Right.” Kana said.
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Chapter 6- Later, Goodbyes

” Emiva. There you are. I have been looking for you.” Said Kana. ”What’s up?” Said Emiva.

He looks down. ”I will explain it tomorrow at the mini-abio. I just wanted to tell you now how much I love you.” He says in a sorrowful tone.

’kana you are scarring me, you sound like you are saying goodbye or something. “ Emiva said scared. ”I will explain it tomorrow. Please. It is important that you come. Along with Srgo and Gwen.” He says as he nuzzles her.
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Chapter 7- That Night, Long Wait.

Later that night, he watches her sleep. Thinking about the day to come.
”I am so sorry my love. Please forgive me. I wish this doesn’t have to be.” kana thinks silently to himself. He looks around at the forest. ”Goodbye forest. I will miss you too.” He says in his mind.

"Goodbye friend.” The forest seems to whisper back. He smiles, lays his head down on Emivas back and closes his eyes.
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Chapter8- Next Afternoon, The Abio.

The min-abio starts and the Twin God lead the other deer off to party. Kana stays behind at the statues to think about everything that has happened.

He hears the party come back towards the statue. The Gods stop at the end of the hill and tell the other deer to stay there. Calling for Emive, they take her up to where Kana is standing. ”Say what you need to say Trapped Soul.” they said. Kana nods at them and turns to Emiva.

”I love you so much. Emiva……” Said Kana. ”Kana please…..” Emiva cries. ”Let me finish.’ He cuts her off.
”I must go. I have never belonged here. The reason I look like a dragon is because I am a dragon. A dragon trapped in a deer body. The Gods were kind enough to help me. But the only way they could is if I found true love. Be true to myself. And to…..” He chokes. ” And to break that true loves heart.” he says softly. ”There was no other way.” He said sadly and turns his head away.

”Kana……” She cries.

”It is time Trapped Soul.” Said the Gods.

”Please don’t do this.” Emiva cried out turning to the Gods.

”It must be done. He made the pact and must uphold it.” They said sadly and turned to Kana.

The Gods cast a spell on Kana. The shackles fall to the ground and as the light fades, a massive blue and black dragon stands were Kana stood. He is slightly transparent but somewhat solid as well. ” I must go. I am truly sorry my love. I wish it didn’t have to be this way.” He says as he cups her face.

”Kana….” But she can’t speak through the tears. ”Be true to yourself Emiva.” Kana said as he flies into the sky and disappears.

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Chapter9- Sorrow, Found, Endings and Beginings.

Everyone looks around confused at what happened. Emiva looks down and to her surprise she sees a peltless deer lying where Kana last stood. She walks up to him and sniffs him. When she did he woke up, startling her back a few steps. He stretches and looks around. “Wha…What happened?” he stutters. “Who are you?” Emiva asks through the tears. ” Rue-u. Wh….Who are you?” He says. ” I am Emiva.” She answers back. “Come meet the others Rue-u.” she said as she nudges him towards the herd of deer.

As the other deer gather around him and ask questions and party, Emiva walks to where Kana was and Rue-u was found. She lies down and cries. From the crowd of deer, Srgo sees Emiva and walks up to her. ” He truly did love you, and so do I. “ He says as he lays down next to her. Saying nothing she buries her tear streaked face into his shoulders and cried.

Hearing footsteps almost identical to kanas’ she looks up to see rue-u standing there, holding purple flowers. ”He said you liked them and I was to keep an eye on you for him. He also said not to blame the Gods, it wasn’t their fault. Rue-u said. She looks up at him and smiles. ”Thank you.” Was all she could say as she took the flowers and cried once more. Bowing to her and Srgo, Rue-u walks back to the other deer and parties with them all night long.

-End-
Emiva's picture

OMG MORE MORE MORE PLZ THIS

OMG MORE MORE MORE PLZ THIS IS SO COOL ITS WRITTEN LIKE A REAL STORY.
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kanastigu's picture

is it just a story? or

is it just a story? or real? hmmmm..... never know do ya? and i might finish. in time.



death is certain, but the hour is not
Emiva's picture

I meant as like, a real

I meant as like, a real book! Not being real or unreal... yes, please do finish! <333




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kanastigu's picture

i thought you ment a story.

i thought you ment a story. or in game real. lol. it isn't a book.



death is certain, but the hour is not
mothwing's picture

Oh please do forgive me,

Oh please do forgive me, Kana, but I think this is so cool, and my mom is an english teacher and I cant stand mispellings. Sorry! Here are some corrections to help (: I'm not sure how to add in the colors though, haha, sorry! (:
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Chapter 1-Night

He awoke from a deep sleep, his head turning every which way. His mind trying to focus on anything it could find. Images flashing in unseeing eyes, both from the dream and from reality. He tries to figure out which is which. Slowly standing, he stretches, shakes his head, and looks towards the doe sleeping beside him. He smiles a sad smile at her, and nuzzles her.
"Wake up Emiva. Its a brand new day." He says in a slightly sad voice.

He leaves her to wake up and goes and takes a sip in the pond near by. Looking at his own reflection, seeing what no other deer could see, he thinks back to his dream, and dreads it. Dreads what will happen to those he loves, and those he has befriended. He takes a quick drink and walks back to the drowsy Emiva.
"Lets go find Gwen and the others" Kana says in a more cheery voice.
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Chapter 2-Next Night

He hears something in the distance and starts to awake. The dragon pelted stag looks around and walks a little ways, as not to wake Emiva.
"Who's there?" He calls out. " Answer me!" He says. Kana looks around again and heads back to the sleeping doe.

"Kanastigu." A voice whispers. He quickly turns around and unfrulls his wings ready to fight. But no one was there. confused he turns back to see one of the Twin Gods standing there. "What do you want?" kana says startled and sourly.

"You know what you must do, Trapped Soul." The God whispers.
Kana looks down. "I know." He says sadly. "But why? Why not just let this Trapped Soul free?" Kana says in a questioning tone.

The God bows and sadly smiles to the misfit. I am truely sorry, Trapped Soul." The God says as it dissapears.

Slightly shaken but more angry than anything else, Kana heads back to Emiva, she stirres.
"Is everything ok? She askes sleeply. He smiles at her. "Yes. Go back to sleep." he says as he nuzzles her. Looking around one more time, he closes his eyes and tries to sleep too.



Milk's picture

I like this, is

I like this, is good.
Mothwing, good idea.
What is trapped soul
Emiva's picture

This is so cool, Kana... do

This is so cool, Kana... do you think I could illustrate some parts? You would probably want to since you are like way better, but yeah X3 <




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kanastigu's picture

mothwing- i know i can't

mothwing- i know i can't spell but thanks. it slitghtly eirks me when people correct it. but don't worry i am not mad.
milk- i can't give away what trapped soul means. but i hope that you can gather that the god is calling kana trapped soul.
emiva- of course you can. but i have already done the end sketch. and i will do some myself.

-anyone is welcome to illustrate this story. but no inputs . i have already written out the story on paper. and thank you all who like it.




death is certain, but the hour is not
kanastigu's picture

i added a few more

i added a few more chapters.



death is certain, but the hour is not
Emiva's picture

YAY. -reads- OH AHHH. IS

YAY.
-reads-

OH AHHH. IS KANA LEAVING. NUUUU. DONT LEAVE. OR ELSE EMIVA SHALL REMAIN UNFAITHFUL AND GO PREY ON OTHER STAGS.
...JK <333


(( oh and this is her color color=#8B475D


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kanastigu's picture

yeah well i am using

yeah well i am using another format. and the onlything clse to that is pruple. so for this it is pruple. lol you know i don't know the format for this. but thankfully it accepts the other format as well.
im not going anywere. i think.


death is certain, but the hour is not

This is pretty wicked,


This is pretty wicked, Kana.
Very well written! (:
Will there be more?
Edit:
Ohai.
Didn't even realize I was in the story up until now. XD
kanastigu's picture

lol. unfortunently that is

lol. unfortunently that is it. it is finished. hence the -End- at the very bottom. lol sorry it was such a small part. lol



death is certain, but the hour is not
Fenqua's picture

Awww, poor Emiva... Even

Awww, poor Emiva...

Even though it was a little short, I enjoyed reading it ^^

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
Emiva's picture

...What the heck are you

...What the heck are you inquiring Kana? D:

...a-are you leaving m-me? ;____;

Other than that though, very well done! Laughing out loud I cant wait to see the pictures that are going to go along with eet <33


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kanastigu's picture

nothing. lol, and hey em

nothing. lol, and hey em you killed everyone in your story i remember that. at least no one died in mine. well then draw some and send me them.
ok ok it was just a story. lol


death is certain, but the hour is not
Emiva's picture

-laughs- :3 ilu kana <33

-laughs- :3 ilu kana <33 -LOVEATTACK-
8D



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mothwing's picture

Thats.... thats sad ;_; But

Thats.... thats sad ;_;

But I LUV it Laughing out loud



kanastigu's picture

i have a cat ibn my lap so

i have a cat ibn my lap so i can;t see what i am typing.
i love u to em


death is certain, but the hour is not
Rue-u's picture

umm... hi i am rue-u. and i

umm... hi i am rue-u. and i want to thank kana for intruducing me. in such a strange fashon?? anyways. even though kana is not leaving. i will be joining. co. hello.
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Epic win <3 --- Updates ||

Epic win <3

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Updates ||
kanastigu's picture

OMG i just realized what i

OMG i just realized what i did with the end of this story. lol has anyone seen k-pax???? lol my bad. lol



death is certain, but the hour is not
mothwing's picture

Never heard of it :3 Can

Never heard of it :3 Can you put MOthwing in this? I want her to be introduced somehow to the site as well... hahahah (:




Emiva's picture

I LOVE that picture... its,

I LOVE that picture... its, so gentle.... (x

and LOL Rue-u I didn't even know you existed.....XDDDDD -SLAPS KNEE-




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mothwing-sorry but this

mothwing-sorry but this story is finished. other than the pictures. and thanks em.
eh.... sorry rue-u. didn't mean for it to be so ....wierd lol
right. and its ok emiva. the story was to introduce me into the forest and what not.


death is certain, but the hour is not

Hey Kana; if you need some


Hey Kana; if you need some pictures for the story, I'd be more than willing to draw some, if thats alright with you.
kanastigu's picture

thats why i posted it

thats why i posted it lol
kana
rue-u
air-o
*^death is certain but the hour is not^*
http://endlessforest.org/community/deer-updates-6

Hehe. Does it matter which


Hehe.
Does it matter which part I draw?
kanastigu's picture

i should have put on there.

i should have put on there. go wild. lol
kana
rue-u
air-o
*^death is certain but the hour is not^*
http://endlessforest.org/community/deer-updates-6

Alright; I'll draw chapter


Alright; I'll draw chapter 7. XD
Thanks.
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That is. awesome

That is.
awesome <333

LOLGETITPUBLISHEDXDDDD



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kanastigu's picture

okie dokkie. and em sorry

okie dokkie. and em sorry but i don't think it is that good.
kana
rue-u
air-o
*^death is certain but the hour is not^*
http://endlessforest.org/community/deer-updates-6
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x333 EMIVA'S BIOGRAPHY

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I think its gorgeous<3

I think its gorgeous<3



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